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What
are we creating in creative writing?
Ray
Misson, University of Melbourne
A
keynote address presented at the 2001 AATE/ALEA Joint National Conference
Before
trying to answer the question in my title, I want to say something about
why I thought it was worth asking the question in the first place?
Creative
Writing is something that happens in English and literacy classes right
through schooling, from kids in prep making up a story to Year 12 students
producing a Writing Folio, and yet, there is not currently a lot that
is written about it, at least in a theoretical way. There are books that
give ideas for creative writing classes, and the odd article in the journals,
usually descriptive of (often excellent) practice, but its not something
that is talked about very much at all. Certainly, after the furore of
the process/genre debates in the eighties, the nineties on the whole were
remarkably silent on the matter of creative writing, and that seems to
be continuing into the new century.
Now
when there is this kind of shift in the questions people are asking, what
in a subject they think is worth talking about, its always interesting
to ask why and what the implications are, particularly when, as I think
is the case here, the actual classroom practice hasnt varied much:
there is as much creative writing going on in schools now as there ever
was. Asking such questions can help us to break open the boxes were
currently thinking in, and move through to a new and richer conception
of what the subject might be.
Youll
notice too that a number of times through what I am saying here, my strategy
is to try to break down some of the binary oppositions that structure
our thinking. Its a simple version of a deconstructive strategy:
I try to show that the opposition is not absolute, but the two terms are
involved in each other. I think this too is useful in breaking us out
of constraining boxes. However, I also think this collapsing of opposites
can be done so easily because writing is an art form, and, as Ive
argued elsewhere, its of the nature of the aesthetic to hold in
tension what might be binary opposites in other domains. Well return
to this notion of writing as an art form a couple of times.
Before
going any further, I should say something about how I am defining creative
writing. Well, Im not, or only very loosely. I dont want to
limit it to just fictional writing, or to just personal "confessional"
writing, or to "free" writing. In fact, what I want to say is
probably true of pretty well all writing. But, because I want to bracket
off the debates around different kinds of writing pedagogy to produce
classroom genres, I have taken the cowardly way out and used the term
"creative writing".
Ive
also been interested for a couple of years now in the aesthetic , creativity
and the imagination, and their place in English classes, and so the term
"creative writing" is useful for signalling this bundle of concerns.
What
I want to do first, is prepare the way by suggesting that some of the
oppositions on which we build our understanding of language and literacy
are not at all such clear oppositions as they may seem and are constantly
collapsing together.
Most
definitions of literacy talk about it as having to do with the four macro
skills reading, writing , speaking and listening, and we divide
them in terms of mode, written or spoken, or, more interestingly, in terms
of reception and production.
This
reception/production distinction is not an entirely easy one. Our reception
of a text is a productive process. We dont simply receive what is
there: we produce a reading of it. This is most obvious in something like
an essay in a literature exam, but its true of all reading and listening.
It was one of those ideas that we grappled with in the early days of literary
theory in the eighties: that there is no pure unimpeded access to a text,
but rather every reading of a text produces a new text since we have changed
and the context will have changed, even if only by having read the text
before. Reading/listening are active processes, and so they are productive
processes. You are producing my words for yourself, even as I speak them.
And
the production of texts is a receptive process. In the moment we write
something, we read it, - in the moment we speak, we hear - we test its
effect, its capacity to convey something like what we want conveyed. We
recognise its possible impact.
Bakhtin
is the person who has theorised this reciprocal interdependence between
reception and production most fully and interestingly (albeit in rather
different terms) in his work on dialogism. "Dialogue" implies
both speaking and listening, reading and writing, reception and production.
You cant have a dialogue unless you both listen and speak: without
listening, you just have parallel monologues.
Bakhtin
saw this reciprocal "dialogue" as absolutely fundamental to
the nature of language, although I want to quote his colleague Voloshinov:
In
point of fact, the word is a two-sided act. It is determined equally by
whose word it is and for whom it is meant. As a word, it is precisely
the product of the reciprocal relationship between speaker and listener,
addresser and addressee
I give myself verbal shape from anothers
point of view.
So,
the distinction between reception and production is not as clear as we
might have thought. It will be no surprise that I would want argue that
fundamental to both reception and production is a critical capacity: that
has been one of the points of dogma in Australian literacy studies ever
since the famous definition of literacy in the Australian Language and
Literacy Policy as involving "the integration of speaking, listening
and critical thingking with reading and writing" . Less universally
received is the view that fundamental to both reception and production
of language is imagination (as I argued in the address I gave in Adelaide
in 1999). These two terms "critical capacity" and "imagination"
- might be seen to be fairly opposed: critical capacity having to do with
objectivity and bringing things into the clear light of reason, with imposing
constraints and limits: imagination having to do with emotion, fantasy
and moving beyond the rational, being seen as marked by freedom from constraints.
However, once again, if we push a little, we will see how thoroughly implicated
they are with each other in both reception and production of language.
If
we map critical capacity and imagination onto the production/reception
distinction, its easy to see how they initially line up.
Critical
capacity most naturally aligns with reception. One hears an utterance,
one reads a text, and one brings it into the light of critical intelligence.
Critical Literacy is predicated on analysing representations, developing
a critical understanding of how a text is constructing the world, critically
understanding what a text is trying to do in positioning its readers.

Imagination
most obviously aligns with production. We imagine something, and out of
our mind we produce, we create. More than this (and this is what Im
going to be on about in much of what I say here) we imagine ourselves
(particularly in school writing) into being the kind of person who writes
this kind of text. We imagine and so create a particular kind of world.
However,
imagination is also fundamental to reception. When we are reading, if
we are reading well, we project ourselves into the text. In fact, we can
only make sense of the text through the imagination. To understand,
we need to imagine a relationship to the kind of text it is. We imagine
what the outcomes of making our own what this text is saying might be.
Equally,
a critical capacity is basic to production. Any text is the product of
self-critical processes. We exercise critical control to see if the text
is being constructed to achieve the effects we want. The words are objectified
even as they are spoken or written, and we are constantly making adjustments
as we critically judge whether our words strike the right note or not.
So,
just to recapitulate, I am making the point that critical and imaginative
powers are very closely linked, and while we may think that criticism
is linked with reception, and imagination with production, in fact it
is important to fill in the other two quadrants of that grid as well,
and acknowledge that imagination is involved in reception and a critical
capacity in production.
The
basis of this is that emotion and reason are in fact very closely linked,
but well come to that later.
Having
given this background, I want to turn to the question of why there hasnt
been a lot of academic work on writing during the last decade. I think
its partly to do with the fact that people are generally quite comfortable
with current modes of teaching writing. Allan Luke, in his opening plenary
address, said that in their research in Queensland schools, they found
the teaching of writing, on the whole, unproblematic (although before
allowing ourselves to breathe a sigh of relief about that, we might well
ask what criteria they were judging against; it could beg the question
of what a writing curriculum might be asked to do).
However,
I think the lack of attention to writing is also to do with the dominant
interests in theorising about literacy education in the nineties, which
were predicated firmly on a social view of language acting as the basis
for critique critical literacy. Now, as weve seen the critical
capacity most obviously aligns with reception, so critical literacy is
predominantly a pedagogy of reception reading and listening. You
look at texts and you see how they are constructed, what values are being
promoted, what is absent from the text, how its trying to position
you ideologically, how its trying to make you receive it. I think
this way of working created an inherent problem in developing a writing
pedagogy. To caricature somewhat, if you believe that all texts are ideological
(and undoubtedly they are) and if that makes you inclined to see the writer
as the enemy who is trying to get you in, and your main interest is in
uncovering the ideology in texts, then what a writing pedagogy would seem
to be doing is teaching people how to become one of these morally suspect
people who write ideologically slanted texts of which we all really ought
to be deeply suspicious. It seemed better, on the whole, to pass over
writing in silence.
Most
critical literacy pedagogy requires an objectifying move. You need to
stand back and look at what the text is trying to do to you. Now you can
do that on your own writing, and thats a kind of writing pedagogy
that Barbara Kamler has used with terrific results, particularly in her
work with ageing women, but I think that its worth noting that it
turns the piece of writing into a text to be read rather than embedding
the critical practice within the productive process. (Barbaras recent
book, Relocating the Personal , is very good. Much of what Im
saying here is a kind of implicit dialogue with it agreeing/extending/disagreeing
- but I didnt want to turn this address into a book review, so the
dialogue will remain implicit. While Im in bibliographic mode, the
other book always referred to when people start talking about Critical
Literacy and writing is Romy Clark and Roz Ivanics The Politics
of Writing . I confess I find it a bit unsatisfying. It covers all
the ground that critical literacy books do about how writing operates
socially and how all texts are ideological, but, in the end it says virtually
nothing about the classroom , i.e. what the implications of all this might
be when youre actually teaching writing, and it says very little
about personal/imaginative writing, which is symptomatic of the inability
of critical literacy to accommodate the imaginative easily.)
Anyway,
getting back to our question. What are we creating in creative writing?
I dont think my answer to the question will come as a surprise to
any of you. Its the good poststructuralist answer, the good critical
literacy answer: we are creating ourselves. We write ourselves into being.
A second answer wont surprise you either: we are creating a world.
By framing whatever were looking at in particular ways, we create
a particular version of the world (and all worlds are only versions).
Now,
I think those answers are basically right, and I guess when I first thought
of talking about writing here, I imagined that they are the answers I
would triumphantly work towards. However, what I really want to do is
take them and look at the ways in which they are right and the ways in
which they are misleading, and follow through some of their implications.
Let
me give a quotation from Foucault, not just because every self-respecting
paper has to have at least one reference to Foucault in it these days,
but because he genuinely is behind much of what Im saying. He is
speaking in an interview about the trajectory of his intellectual life:
Im
perfectly aware of always being on the move in relation both to the things
Im interested in and to what Ive already thought. What I think
is never quite the same, because for me my books are experiences, in a
sense, that I would like to be as full as possible. An experience is something
that one comes out of transformed. If I had to write a book to communicate
what Im already thinking before I begin to write, I would never
have the courage to begin. I write a book only because I still dont
exactly know what to think about this thing I want so much to think about,
so that the book transforms me and what I think. I am an experimenter
and not a theorist, I call a theorist someone who constructs a general
system, either deductive or analytical, and applies it to different fields
in a uniform way. Im an experimenter in the sense that I write in
order to change myself and in order not to think the same thing as before.
If
you want a summary for an ideal of what writing should achieve, I think
that that last sentence could well be your slogan: "
I write
in order to change myself and in order not to think the same thing as
before."
We
dont write (just) to express ourselves. Another quotation, this
one from Gilles Deleuze (who, among certain groups, is even trendier than
Foucault these days):
"One
speaks (and writes
) from the depth of what one does not know, from
the depth of ones sous-développement à soi (underdevelopment
to or within oneself)."
Within
critical theory, there has been a lot of critique of expressivism, the
idea that texts are the expression of pre-existent ideas emanating from
a pre-existent self, and that to understand the meaning we move back through
the text to the originating self. (This is what Barthes was arguing against
in "The Death of the Author".) Whats happening with writing
is something much more dynamic, much more creative, much more involved
in the moment of writing itself.

However,
there is another opposition there that I want to put under a question
mark and try to collapse: that between expression and creation. While
I think its strategic to insist on the importance of exploratory
writing, that we dont have texts formed in our heads before we start,
the extreme view that the concept and the text come into being at the
same moment simply doesnt accord with our experiences. We all experience
ourselves as thinking/feeling beings, and it is out of that experience
of ourselves that we write. We write with pre-existent purpose, we write
to express things.
Whats
remarkable is that, at the same time as that, within the process of expression,
we also create. We find ourselves saying more or less than we thought.
We are constantly surprising ourselves. There is always (as Derrida has
argued in a rather different way) an excess to writing, something other
than we intended. Its not that we discover what we really think,
because we have not thought it until we wrote it. So, writing is a complex
mesh of simultaneous expressing and creating, and the two things cant
be separated. No-one ever wrote seriously without an expressive purpose.
Similarly, I dont imagine anyone ever wrote (a complex text at least),
that was not something different from that initiating expressive purpose,
that didnt produce an excess of meaning. Ill give an example
of this in a minute. (Bakhtin is also interesting on this, with his reflections
on the connection between inner speech and outer speech.)
So
writing is simultaneously a way of expressing what was thought and of
thinking the unthought to return to Foucaults terms: "not
thinking the same thing as before". I want now to turn to the other
element from Foucault, that notion of writing as an experience that transforms
the self. I suppose its self-evident that if you are thinking differently
than you were before, then in some sense you have been transformed. The
question seems to me to be how far we can push this, or how far we want
to push it.
This
is bound up with whatever view you might hold of how human beings are
constructed, and this is not the place to get into those questions. Its
also to do with how you conceive the relationship between the individual,
experience and language.
In
older models, the basic idea was that experience came to the individual
and then the individual expressed it in language. These days we see language
as much more central to the process than this suggests. The individual
can only process experience through language, and experience acts through
language and creates a particular kind of individual. If an event happens,
it can be seen through various frames, discourses: the stories we tell
ourselves about the event will shape the person we are. Of course, we
tell ourselves stories in lots of different ways. I lose my car keys and
I can turn it into a tragedy, a farce, a sociological study of our dependence
on motor vehicles, a psychological study of how stress manifests itself
and in each case I will be creating myself (to myself as much as to others),
as a different person. All of those different tellings are in my repertoire,
and all the different selves (subjectivities) out of which those tellings
would emanate are part of me.
Its
part of what teachers should be doing, making students capable of those
different tellings, and making them able to discriminate which version
they need to and can responsibly tell at a particular time. (This is exactly
what Jonothan Neelands was talking about in his plenary address.)
In
some ways what Ive been giving here is a classic account of socially-produced
multiple subjectivities, how we are not unified people but can perfectly
easily accommodate quite different readings of the same experience, seen
through different discourses, how we can live perfectly easily in contradictory
responses and beliefs. What interests me more at the moment is the question
of what allows them to coexist together, and what it is that activates
us into telling one story rather than the other, what actually makes us
prefer one possible view, entertain some elements of a second, and reject
a third. In other words, I am finding the classic multiple subjectivities
theorization rather too limiting, but thats another story.
There
is no doubt that changing the discourse, shifting the perspective can
be very powerful, and can have massively beneficial effects, not just
socially, but personally. It allows people to see how they might be more
powerful in their life worlds. Its also the premise on which much
therapy operates you tell and retell your story until you arrive
at a version that you can live with happily. And there is no doubt that
a lot of creative writing can have therapeutic effects. Barbara Kamler
has some particularly striking examples of this in her book where people
have been transformed by retelling their stories in different ways . Kevin
Brophy in his book on creativity talks about the enormous popularity of
creative writing programs for adults , and I suspect that the driving
purpose of all these people (apart from fame and fortune) is therapeutic,
self-transformation.
Note
how emotion is bound up in all of this. It is not just a matter of thinking
differently, but of feeling differently. Foucault talks about writing
as an experience, and "an experience is something that one comes
out of transformed" Such transformation is never just a rational
matter. In fact, as I foreshadowed, I want to suggest that feeling and
reason are closely bound up with each other. Early last year in Queensland,
I gave an address in which I tried to demonstrate how you couldnt
divorce the affective from knowledge and skills . A few months later,
Ros Arnold from Sydney alerted me to the work of the neurologist Antonio
Damasio . What Damasio argues very convincingly from a wealth of neurological
evidence is that feeling is bound up with reason, that in fact when the
parts of the brain that are concerned with emotion and feeling are damaged,
people cant reason properly either. So when we know things differently,
it is inevitably not just intellectual knowing but emotional knowing.
Ros Arnold has done some interesting work relating this to empathy
empathic intelligence and I would argue in fact that empathic intelligence
is something that is necessary for (and developed by) creative writing
But
all of this is pretty theoretical. What does it mean in practice and what
are its implications for education?
What
I want to do for the rest of my time is, first of all, give grounding
to some of the things Ive been saying by, perhaps rather self-indulgently,
doing some introspection about a piece of writing I did recently, and
then finally look in two different ways at how all this might affect what
is done in the classroom.
When
youre thinking through a topic like this, you inevitably look to
your own practice, and test what youre saying against it. It would
be a bit too ridiculously reflexive to talk about the processes of writing
this present talk, but I was thinking about the processes of writing the
opening sentence of an article I finished earlier this year that will
be published later this year in a book edited by Michele Anstey and Geoff
Bull called Crossing the Boundaries . Its a book that looks
at how cultural theory might be valuable in reading childrens and
young adult literature, and I was writing a chapter on gay and lesbian
theory.
My
thinking went something like this. I wanted the piece to be fairly assertive,
even a bit confronting, because its easy to fall into being apologetic
about bringing homosexuality to the attention of people when they might
prefer one remained silent about it. I also think its not good enough
just to treat homosexuality as a social issue. So, from the beginning
I wanted to take a strong position. I wanted a fairly arresting opening
to establish this, and also partly because I thought it was a chapter
that people might think they could pass over, and if they even began to
read it, I wanted them to be caught up for a bit.

So
the driving force was not so much what I wanted to say, but a kind of
feeling, a kind of impact that I wanted to have on the reader. (Thats
usually true for me: the general feeling of the piece, the tone I want
to strike, always seems to be one of the first considerations there before
getting down to the particulars of the points I want to make. You can
see why Im sympathetic to Damasio. I have just never been able to
think of argument or academic writing or even administrative writing as
unrelated to feeling.)
The
opening gesture came to me from a number of sources. The experience its
drawing on is other writing, and theres a quite complex intertextuality
going on. There is a fantastic moment at the very end of Jonathon Dollimores
book Sexual Dissidence. Its a very long, heavily theoretical
and quite difficult book, but he ends it with these sentences:
As
for Genet, someone whose involvement with the different has variously
been repudiated as fascist, racist, and anarchic, his Prisoner of Love
is nothing less than an affirmation of the love that Fanon envisaged and
which has sometimes given the dissident their courage. If I risk ending
this long study of sexual dissidence by speaking of love it is without
apology and simply to acknowledge its inspiration.
I
remember the first time I read that almost having my breath taken away
by that sudden emergence of the personal into the academic. Memory of
this moment coalesced with an article by Bronwyn Davies in a journal to
which I also contributed on Sexualities and Schooling. Bronwyn started
her article, entitled "The Discourse of Love":
Why
write about the experience of love when the topic is sexuality? What,
if anything, do love and sexuality have to do with each other? Everything,
perhaps? Or nothing
.
O.K.
so I had "love" as the place to start. But what to say about
it. A third element came in. I have been reading Deborah Britzman and
her book Lost Subjects, Contested Objects: Towards a Psychoanalytic
Inquiry of Learning. I wont go on to explain what she says about
it, but she has a discussion around a sentence from Samuel Delany, - she
relates it to education "Why speak of whats uncomfortable
to speak of?" . I had been thinking about difficulty and not taking
the line of least resistance in class, but actually confronting the uncomfortable,
the difficult Ill come back to this later. So, the article
now starts:
Its
hard to talk about love in a classroom.
(Originally,
it was Its difficult to talk about love in a classroom,
but hard was more aesthetically pleasing.) That seemed to
me pretty good Then I thought, "Oh, shit, Ive got to say why."
So the demands of writing, the genre, if you like, led me to articulate
some reasons. I then felt the need for a parallel structure, "Its
hard to talk about desire in a classroom." In the end, the opening
became a kind of academic prose poem.
So,
out of a need to write something on a topic Id promised, a desire
to hit a particular note, bits of reading I had done and phrases I had
picked up, my combinative imagination, my rational and critical capacities,
the demands of the genre, my sense of aesthetics, I produced this piece
of writing, and thought things that I had not thought before.
But,
with regard to the other aspect of our Foucault quote, did I come out
of it transformed? I remember thinking as I was writing it that I was
creating a writing position, a sense of myself, that was rather unlike
anything I had done before and that I didnt know I was capable of.
Certainly I thought, I couldnt have written this two years ago.
The confidence to write it came out of changes that have happened in my
life over that time. So, in a complex mesh with other experience, the
experience of writing did transform me, create a new self, at least through
the recognition of a new self. If you ask, did my friends and family notice
any difference, the answer is almost certainly no. But then, writing the
article was only a small part of my life, and the rest was either going
on in similar ways as always or other changes were happening there. I
think one of the problems with multiple subjectivities talk is that people
rarely acknowledge the multiplicity of the subject positions we take up
in a day, the myriad selves we call on , and the complexity of the relations
between them, which make its unlikely that you will ever write some
single thing that changes you personally in a way that anyone else would
notice. All that one can hope for is accretion towards some beneficial
change.
Which
brings me to the classroom.
The
first thing that needs to be said, as a kind of preface, is that, so far
Ive been talking about writing done outside the classroom for some
purpose authentic writing if you like. I think weve got to
accept that very little of the writing done in literacy classes is really
authentic, except insofar as its an authentic school task. Most
of the writing is at best a rehearsal for authenticity. I like the drama
metpahor in that phrase because it suggests the taking on of the particular
writer identity. Teachers are setting up situations in which students
can practice, take on the role of being a particular kind of writer in
a particular kind of situation.
What
ought we to be creating in creative writing? Why is creative writing important?
Some
would say that one reason for its importance is that it provides an open
space for students to reflect on their personal lives and come to terms
with their experience the therapeutic answer. My initial reaction
is to reject this out of hand because it seems so uncritical, but I dont
want to be unfair. There is no doubt that this opportunity to recreate
something of their experience and come to terms with it is valuable for
some kids, perhaps at some time valuable for all kids. And its particularly
valuable if the teacher intervenes and asks the kids to think through
other frameworks, get different perspectives, think differently than before.
However,
"personal" writing is not something to build a writing curriculum
on. The classroom is not the confessional or the psychiatrists couch,
and, thankfully, most kids dont have enough new traumas (as opposed
to ongoing traumas) in their lives to provide interesting material for
more than a major therapeutic piece every now and then. Besides there
is a fundamental ethical problem with getting kids to expose their personal
lives in their writing, and its not something any teacher should
ask. The words "Just write how you feel" should be banned from
all classrooms, for all sorts of reasons.
The
writing curriculum is valuable because it is a place where
a. students
can learn how to open up new understanding by framing the world differently,
b. students
can imagine different ways of being and rehearse different ways of seeing
and feeling.
Any
writing curriculum should be based on an understanding that each act of
writing does give a partial view of the world, which is a fundamental
understanding in critical literacy, that in framing the world in language
we cut out other perspectives. But this needs to be seen as a potential
strength. We cant understand anything if its not framed in
certain ways: framing is not just a way of limiting but a way of understanding
. We cant achieve anything, make our writing matter, unless we frame
experience in a way that makes sense of it. One of the favourite critical
literacy questions, because of a suspicion of the partiality of framing,
is "what views are absent from this text." Its a valuable
question, but a more valuable one when writing is "Do the views as
represented in this text allow me to understand or achieve what I want?"
And, of course, "Is what I want to achieve worth achieving?

Alternatively,
rather than the absence question, I prefer the consequences question:
"O.K. this is what the text is saying: imagine the consequences if
this view were carried through. Tell me a story about it." So, rather
than suspicion, we go into productive mode. We imagine how things might
really operate in the world, albeit reminding ourselves that it is only
one version of how things might operate in one world.
I
think a writing curriculum should help students understand themselves,
but understand themselves as huge potential. By getting them to write
in different ways, imagine different stories that might be told about
the same event, they come to understand the possibilities within themselves.
There needs to be at least a basic understanding that they can operate
in different discourses, create themselves as different people and relate
to their world in different ways. The basic notion of multiple subjectivities
isnt a hard concept to get. There actually was a wonderful teaching
opportunity for this during Wimbledon, although it was a fairly extreme
case: Im of course referring to Goran Ivanisevic, who, you undoubtedly
know, has two contradictory Gorans inside of him. This isnt particularly
notable or postmodern. The notion of there being warring selves within
the person has a long history particularly in Christian thought, right
down through Walt Disney cartoons, where moral dilemmas were often projected
as an angelic and a devilish version of Donald Duck or whoever it was
arguing with each other. What was interesting and a bit postmodern about
Goran Ivanisevic though, was that there was Emergency Goran, this third
figure who he could call on to mediate between the other two. Thats
a wonderful writing opportunity. Create the three Gorans in dialogue,
or giving their view of the same event. Or create three versions of yourself
including an Emergency one.
Such
an exercise, actually, can have a therapeutic outcome. While I dont
think students should be required to expose their own emotional issues
in a classroom, they can be given the opportunity to do it through narrative.
They can consider their own concerns safely through projecting them into
other actions and other characters.
I
also think that writing classes should be about the art of writing. In
curriculum documents, because of the broad uses of language, writing/literature
is always hived off into a separate Learning Area or Field of Study called
English. But a natural place for writing/literature is in the Arts Learning
Area, and I actually think we could learn a lot from looking at some of
the Arts curriculum and asking what it can suggest for English. Arts curricula
usually are less sophisticated in their notions of social context and
their theorization of what the study is aiming at, but they do often have
a more detailed sense of the process of developing the work, the craft,
the technique, and also of the processes in the classroom. E.g. the kind
of work I did on my opening sentence, articulating my intentions, the
influences, the materials out of which it was made - the process - would
not be unusual in Visual Arts classes if I were talking about developing
a painting or a collage. Students are asked to keep visual diaries. Jonothan
Neelands in his address related Drama and English in various ways, but
I think the normal reflective debriefing session at the end of a drama
activity is something English teachers could learn from. We set writing
tasks that can take as much imaginative commitment as a drama improvisation,
but we often dont feel any responsibility for bringing the students
down from it and giving them a chance to talk it through.
All
this takes work on the part of the teacher, and I want to finish by stressing
this, because I think there is at times a temptation to see the creative
writing part of the curriculum as the friendly, open part where the kids
can disport themselves freely. But a writing curriculum such as Ive
been suggesting where kids are learning about how writing leads to new
ways of thinking and new selves wont just happen. It takes a lot
of setting up, and can be met with resistance.
I
mentioned Deborah Britzmans work before. She starts off her book
with a quotation from Anna Freud, who writes:
"Step
by step education aims at the exact opposite of what the child wants,
and at each step it regards as desirable the very opposite of the childs
instinctual strivings."
Anna Freud in the end describes education as "interference".
This is perhaps a rather bleak view, but there is more than a grain of
truth in it. (Whenever I think of this stuff about education as interference,
my mind goes to Lady Bracknell who didnt "approve of anything
that tampers with natural ignorance".)
Education
is not always a wonderfully benign process, but interferes with preconceptions,
naturalised understandings, a desire for an easy life. And teachers have
to decide what they want to achieve and how they need to interfere to
achieve it. There is a great temptation to take the easy way, as Allan
Luke was saying, to set up a pleasant, socially supportive environment
where the kids are entertained but nothing much is happening intellectually,
no real demands are being made. Frederick Leung, Dean of Education at
HKU, give a paper last year on a big international study of mathematics
education. He was describing a similar incident to the one Allan told
in Maths. He was in a maths class in London and this teacher had the kids
playing all these wonderful games, and everyone was having a good time,
but Frederick gradually realised the kids werent learning anything,
and when at the end he asked the teacher what they were meant to be learning,
she couldnt tell him. He actually quoted in contrast the Confucian
saying, The roots of education are bitter, but the flower is sweet."
Now, Im not for a moment suggesting that we should go to Confucian
style education, but I do think we need to take seriously the evidence
that greater intellectual demands should be made. If we dont, governments
are quite capable of imposing what they see as greater intellectual quality,
and well finish up with the empty kind of rigour that is there in
the English system.

I
think its particularly easy with creative writing to talk oneself
into not intervening, not requiring the students to do things differently,
not setting strict enough parameters for the tasks. But they wont
learn much that way.
Another
aspect of education that Britzman talks about is the way it represses
certain things, makes certain things unable to be spoken about. It constructs
knowledge in certain ways that repress uncomfortable complications. The
aim of education is to create community, but to do it, it must inevitably
repress difference. Its a very complicated argument that I havent
got time to develop here. Taking some inspiration from the work of Maxine
Greene, she suggests that the arts are a way of making the repressed return
in education, of imagining different relationships, of expressing repressed
alternative knowledges . Through imaginative creation, we can recover
the complexity of feeling and being that education tends to bleach out.
This too calls for a difficult pedagogy, but one which in the end is also
a pedagogy of possibility, of hope. Perhaps its even a way of talking
about love in the classroom.
I
want to round off with another quotation from Foucault which suggests
one of the sources of difficulty teachers have to contend with:
Everyone
has their own way of changing, or, what amounts to the same thing, of
perceiving that everything changes. In this matter, nothing is more arrogant
than to try to dictate to others. My way of no longer being the same is,
by definition, the most singular part of what I am. Yet God knows that
there are ideological traffic police around, and we can hear their whistles
blast: go left, go right, here, later, get moving, not now
. The
insistence on identity and the injunction to make a break both feel like
impositions, and in the same way.
Writing,
as a private productive space where we can work out our ways of changing
is vitally important. The trick for teachers is to create the space, interfere
in productive ways, but not become the ideological traffic police. All
we can do is try.
Writing
is an art, and it has struck me while writing this paper that, within
English, we are in danger of enacting in miniature whats happening
across the school curriculum in underplaying the significance of the Arts.
The Arts Learning Area is the Cinderella of the curriculum, but its
stuck absolutely in the kitchen and theres not a fairy godmother,
let alone a prince in sight. The last thing we would want to do strategically
or politically if we were concerned to promote creative writing is to
relate it to the Arts: it would be the death knell. Governments promote
English because of languages functional importance as a foundation
for all community activity and leaning. Creative writing sneaks in under
the umbrella. The Arts have no umbrella, so they are constantly downgraded
in comparison with English, Maths, Science, Technology, - the "useful"
things. Within English, I think there is a parallel tendency at the moment
to underplay the importance of the aesthetic/artistic side of reading
and writing. What we desperately need (and maybe we could create an alliance
with teachers in the Arts to produce it) is a powerful, overwhelming rationale
for the importance of the arts, including writing, in human life, and
we need the political will to promote it. Until we do, I think there will
be a genuine question as to whether we really are leading literate lives.
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